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[Sean and Such Ep. 10]

Fun!

The dialog was good and the animation wasn't too bad either! The only thing I would say is it's a little slow. It might help to change up the background music and sound effects (pet store would have birds and a buncha animal noises!). or change the camera angles around, it was the same the entire time. I'm no film expert, but these are a few things that might be a good idea.

Overall, really good! Best of luck to the rest of your series! I look forward to the next episodes!

SeanAndSuch responds:

Thank you for the feedback and such. While I understand that more dynamic camera angles would be awesome and incredible, we did this episode in 10 days instead of about 30 which is the norm so that should be taken into account.
Most of our other episodes have more camera angles.
Regarding the pet store sounds, they are annoying and most people don't want to hear animal noises throughout the episode so omitting that on our part should be considered a favor from us to you ; )

Thanks again for the kind words and keep watching!!

-Sean

[Bunnykill 4]

Freakin Awesome!

The animation was incredibly smooth, and with most kill um' type cartoons like this one I get bored and don't even watch the end, but this one had a fun story involved with the gore! I was actually truly interested with what was going to happen at the end. I expected the boy bunny to kill the evil bunny ninja at the last second when it looked like the evil bunny was going to win, but that wasn't the case! Okay, I'm done ranting. Great characters, great animation, creative fights and moves. Just great stuff all around! All I would say to critique this would be the sound effects. Some of them got annoying when they were used over and over again.

Mottis responds:

Thanks.

Indeed, the sound effects tend to get repetitive. I tried my best to avoid this however, I have several versions of each sound, slightly different. I had like 5 different sound clips for the Sai(daggers) alone, and 3 swing sound effects for the katana for example.